It is important for travellers and business people to understand the cultures they come into contact with, however briefly. What are the main advantages of doing so? What do you think is the main disadvantage of not doing so?
For voyagers and money managers, comprehending the way of life they visit is undoubtedly essential, anyway momentarily. In this essay, I will outline the pros of doing it, and the cons of not doing it.
On the one hand, understanding a country’s national identity brings a wide range of benefits. Firstly, it tremendously helps people avoid culture shock and other culture-related problems. For example, in communication, while Western individuals tend to speak directly to the issue, the Eastern has a tendency to beat around the bush, it can be understood that they do not want to offend others by words. As a result, when speaking to people from the East, they may feel uncomfortable, eventually frustrated.
In addition, getting a deeper insight into the cultures of the markets helps business firms increase sales and maximize profit. For businessmen and businesswomen, when they want to run a profit and expand sales into other states, they must know what people in that country are interested in. For instance, selling clothes such as bodysuits or miniskirts for females in religious regions is believed to be impossible as governments of these nations do not accept citizens to wear them.
However, if travellers and business people are lack of understanding cultures and traditions, cultural misconceptions can occur. Accordingly, in the USA, it is common to give a kiss as a way of greeting, on the contrary, this is unacceptable for Vietnamese, instead, they do handshaking or bow their head.
In conclusion, it is necessary for visitors and business managers to adapt to the host country’s cultures and customs if they want to enjoy their trips and run a profitable business. By doing so, discrimination and misunderstanding will decline, the economies will grow.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, anyway, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21602787456 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22114081618 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602787456446 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4007062359 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.153846154 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1538461538 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298670706175 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0942071212934 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402731030077 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159682355385 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231516750448 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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