It is irrefutable that migrating to urban areas has become a common trend among masses in the latter day. Presently, an argument has been put forward that there are tremendous causes of the phenomena of housing but these imolications can be removed with the help of authority as well as an individual too.
Multifarious points can be mentioned to depict the reasons of the problem of housing in cities . To start from scratch, there is no doubt that in rural area, due to lack of adequate amenities masses can not survive in a better way simultaneously even after getting high qualification they can not get employment ,which makes their life difficult but in cities,they get better job opportunities as well as a luxurious lifestyle owing to having enough facilities. Consequently, population has becoming more in urban areas.
Further emphasizing on my point of view . Going to cities from rural areas leads to immense obstacles for the lifestyle of urban area. As, more and more folks migrate to cities,which can ruin the peace of cities and city areas can be conjucted. Along with this, problem of pollution will also be increased because if in huge amount people live in urban areas then they will definitely use vehicles for commuting to their work places, which can give birth to many kind of chronic diseases that are very detrimental for the health of citizens . As a result, housing is a big concerning issue in the cities.
Opposite wind is also there, opponents advocate that few remedies can assist to solve the problem of housing on individual level or by regime. It is observed that demose migrate to cities from villages due to less facilities and this problem can be solved by providing basic amenities to the folks by government in rural areas because if they attain employment and fundamental amenities in villages then will have no need to go to meghazones and in this way, the places of cities will not be conjucted. Thus, hurdles of housing can be tackled.
In conclusion, as per my above discussion i firmly believe that although housing may lead to plethora of obstacles in cities yet this problem can be curbed by putting feasible endeavors by administration and masses on individual level
It is irrefutable that migrating to urban areas has become a common trend among masses in the latter day. Presently, an argument has been put forward that there are tremendous causes of the phenomena of housing but these implications can be removed with the help of authority as well as an individual too.
Multifarious points can be mentioned to depict the reasons of the problem of housing in cities . To start from scratch, there is no doubt that in rural area, due to lack of adequate amenities masses can not survive in a better way simultaneously even after getting high qualification they can not get employment ,which makes their life difficult but in cities,they get better job opportunities as well as a luxurious lifestyle owing to having enough facilities. Consequently, population has becoming more in urban areas.
Further emphasizing on my point of view . Going to cities from rural areas leads to immense obstacles for the lifestyle of urban area. As, more and more folks migrate to cities,which can ruin the peace of cities and city areas can be conjucted. Along with this, problem of pollution will also be increased because if in huge amount people live in urban areas then they will definitely use vehicles for commuting to their work places, which can give birth to many kind of chronic diseases that are very detrimental for the health of citizens . As a result, housing is a big concerning issue in the cities.
Opposite wind is also there, opponents advocate that few remedies can assist to solve the problem of housing on individual level or by regime. It is observed that demose migrate to cities from villages due to less facilities and this problem can be solved by providing basic amenities to the folks by government in rural areas because if they attain employment and fundamental amenities in villages then will have no need to go to meghazones and in this way, the places of cities will not be conjucted. Thus, hurdles of housing can be tackled.
In conclusion, as per my above discussion i firmly believe that although housing may lead to plethora of obstacles in cities yet this problem can be curbed by putting feasible endeavors by administration and masses on individual level
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ualification they can not get employment ,which makes their life difficult but in ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...makes their life difficult but in cities,they get better job opportunities as well as...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
... has becoming more in urban areas. Further emphasizing on my point of view . Going...
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Suggestion: .
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Suggestion: , which
...s, more and more folks migrate to cities,which can ruin the peace of cities and city a...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'many kinds'.
Suggestion: many kinds
...ir work places, which can give birth to many kind of chronic diseases that are very detri...
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Suggestion: .
...y detrimental for the health of citizens . As a result, housing is a big concernin...
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun facilities is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... migrate to cities from villages due to less facilities and this problem can be solv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, may, so, then, thus, well, in conclusion, kind of, no doubt, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1857.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.952 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79379734464 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541333333333 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.287587882 49.4020404114 223% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 132.642857143 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7857142857 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368318350076 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137069174329 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147867121939 0.0667982634062 221% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2546339951 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.27235721835 0.056905535591 479% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.