It is the job of governments and companies to deal with the huge environmental problems which we face. Individuals on their own can do little or nothing’. What is your opinion about this statement?
The globe phenomenon of industrialization has brought development and prosperity, albeit at the cost of the environment. While many people are concerning about the Earth due to the damages made by human beings, some argue that only governments and companies are responsible and capable, to tackle the huge environmental problems. Personally, I firmly believe in the view that environmental issues cannot be solved without individuals and common residents would play a significant role.
To begin with, without the assistance of people, what have done by Government and companies would have low or no efficient. This is because most of the policies or projects made by huge organizations, especially the governments, are only a slogan or concept to educate people. For example, if people ignore the promotion which aims to convert the usage of natural resources to renewable or green energy, and insist on a traditional and not environmental friendly lifestyle, the efforts and budget spent from the government are pointless. It is clear that people are the one who takes actions for environmental protection most of the time, after the lead of big companies and governments.
In addition, although it seems very limited for one person to do for the Earth, there are 7 billion people in the world, which would definitely multiply the outcomes. Individuals can make a big difference with the help of the Internet. Take the Forest as an example. It is an application, created and developed by some Chinese young people, where people can donate trees by collecting sunshine. It said that there are more than 50,000 trees have been planted in Africa for now. Step by step, individuals can change the situation.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that governments and companies are vital for protecting the environment while individuals should not be neglected. Only by combining all the three resources together, can the problem be solved as soon as possible.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...t of the environment. While many people are concerning about the Earth due to the damages made...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25714285714 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06261193048 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580952380952 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4815912561 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.4 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201846053502 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610460006003 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371641367484 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115952577997 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0148902643167 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.