It is more important for the government to spend public funds on preventative measures and promoting healthy lifestyle rather than treatment. Do you agree or disagree?
Some people think that the authority should invest state capitals in precautions and improving a healthy lifestyle more than healing. While this essay agrees that preventative solutions and developing a healthy lifestyle are quite significant, the writer also believes that treatment is essential.
On the one hand, avoiding diseases and having a healthy lifestyle are very important. Firstly, expenditure for preventing diseases is cheaper than cure for both patients and society in the long term. This is because although patients are cured of an illness, they may suffer some after-effects of that disease. While the cost of effective preventative measures is cheaper, people have to pay more money for these after-effects. Besides, because effective prevention will decrease a lot of patents, spending of the government on healthcare services will reduce. Secondly, having a healthy lifestyle is more economically effective than healing. Obviousely, the cost of a gym membership is cheaper than the cost in hospital and expenditure for gym park is cheaper than its for medical equipment.
On the other hand, treatment should be invested equally in precautions and improving healthy lifestyle. Because there are numerous diseases that people can not prevent. In fact, humans can suffer from genetic diseases such as diabetes, congenital heart disease and cancers. Besides, people can have unexpected accidents although they applied preventive solutions. As a result, the government should invest in medical equipment at hospitals and training future doctors at medical schools. For example, currently, the corona pandemic is very complicated in the world. Although doctors are fully equipped with medical equipment to avoid being infected with this disease, a variety of them are still infected.
In conclusion, the government should equally spend public funds on preventive measures, promoting a healthy lifestyle and curative methods.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...utions and improving healthy lifestyle. Because there are numerous diseases that people...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6941580756 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89782222936 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536082474227 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8864072113 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.4705882353 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1176470588 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.94117647059 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299287948934 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094082141022 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817540693304 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209170347626 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0927004951304 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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