It is more important for school children to learn about local history than world history. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
It is often argued that learning the local history is much more important than the world history when it comes to children. Although i agree that teaching local history is requried, i think world histroy also plays a major role in their life.
There is no denying that children should learn the local histroy. It helps them to stay connected to their roots. children who understand the history of their state or village are most likely to respect to their ancestors. This will help them to grow up as a proud citizen.
While it is true that children have several reason to learn local history, they have equal amout on reason to learn world history. Firstly, we belong to same world. Nowadays, old has become a global village and the line between local and foreign history is blurring. Many people are moving to other countries because of the culture they liked, climatic conditions etcetera.
Today's school children are the citizens of tomorrow. When they grow up some peple want to move to other countries for abroad education and job opportunities. Actually, a larg number of them even migrating to foreign countires. When children know that their culture and histor are as glorious as our's, they start respecting their culture and values more. Learning international history also makes immgrates easier. It also helps and prevents the children falling from the traps.
To conclude, it is impossible to deny that local history is more important than the forigne history. Children should learn both to get better understanding of the world and it's working.
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actually, also, first, firstly, if, so, while, i think, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01915708812 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.468604705 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55938697318 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1480400853 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.7777777778 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344572359664 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1034452637 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100710253214 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212940973296 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0974009038799 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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