In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution?
Some people believed that the best way to reduce the traffic could be possible by increasing the tax for the private automobiles, this money must be used to improve the public transport which help common person. The solution have its own advantages and disadvantages will discuss about them in details.
On one hand, charging personal car owners with high tax rates, allocating this profit to the public transport is a good idea. The usage of the own vehicles will gradually decrease, everyone starts taking the government transport if they provide more facilities. However, it also reduces the consumption of natural gases, pollution and keeps environment safe. Moreover, we can decline the traffic congestion problem.
On the other hand, hiking the tax rates for the private vehicles owners affects the people who lives in a remote areas and outside of the side the cities because they cannot find the public transport very oftenly. Most of the countryside people have to take private transport if they have any emergency. So, increasing the tax rates will be a burden for them, it could lead to negative opinion over the government. As the demand of the motor vehicles decreases leads to unemployment which could be the other problem for the government.
In conclusion, the solution of charging the private vehicle owners has it own benefits as well as drawbacks. The government should come up with alternative solutions instead of increasing the tax rates.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1589958159 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69323494506 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581589958159 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5237270247 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.75 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9166666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220731723229 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749807627433 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567783302787 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145696606544 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592248639655 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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