It is much more convenient to watch a movie on television or computer than buy a ticket and go to the cinema. In the nearest future the popularity of cinemas will drastically decline.
Do you agree or disagree?
It is certain that more and more people from all over the world much more enjoy modernization rather than go to cinema, in order to watch movie. As passing times, lot of proportion of tickets have been staying in inactive manner. Similarly, I completely agree with the following statement that such ticket have been experiencing unprecedented drop.
In my view, many technological progressions are responsible for theater’s unworthy. In additional, while most of the people prefer to went to movie cinema in last decades, home theater and laptops are considering significantly in modern world because of suitable for relaxation. Furthermore, that there are plenty of advantages means people, who enjoy movies in home, can save quite time, and it gives some opportunity to enjoy these movies with only family, formulating pleasurable atmosphere. Therefore, much people, living in developed countries prefer to watch movies and other programs in their accommodation.
Secondly, the figures for ticket is being decreasing considerably. In terms of drop, two of major factor, forcing people to sit in home are money problem and authorization. In this contemporary society, piracy is raising, copyrighting lot of movie in barely exact time. For example, there are wide range of sites, where people can watch movie, that have recently composed. Therefore, people feel that they can watch such television program by paying less movie. Another example is that movies are showing us too expansive. So, people are not be able to appreciate that.
In conclusion, people are watching movie and television programs in accommodation, influencing worthy of cinema conversely. Personally, it would approve far more importance to deciding watch quality movie or just watch copy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 511, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, furthermore, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46715328467 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0359435909 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631386861314 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.3755403425 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.625 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1875 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213986361416 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648125868613 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063645972549 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142784737879 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061937500898 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.