Is it necessary for the schools to teach behaviour in addition to the formal
education? Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, there is a controversial issue about the scope of school education. This essay agrees that students should be taught right ethical perspective and that this opinion would become a key to decrease crime. I would like to examine reasons for this in the following essay.
Some people say that implementation for the extracurricular course is not necessary for students who are busy entering university.
They don't have enough time to listen to a boring personality education. For example, especially private school, its goal is to send students a better university and mothers who have an ardor for children's study may protest if they add such an education at school. Therefore, it is not considered to be an urgent matter for both schools and household.
However, there is an important point beyond learning academic skills. That is because scholars should establish proper characteristic, but they could adapt to the new condition of society.
For instance, the British survey says that the number of double income families has become increased so that parents have less time to take care of their kids. For that aftermath, the teenagers who are the lack of cognitive abilities might commit a crime.
As a result, school interested parties should take an action regarding conducting moral program as quickly as possible.
There is controversy about promoting ethics programs in addition to regular courses. Once again, this essay concurs that the school provides these programs. Students will grow up to socially promising adults beyond acquiring basic scholastic studies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36653386454 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80329777884 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661354581673 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8226495701 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7333333333 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164419718581 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498282923344 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406843508219 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0702262655455 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422965944793 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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