It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science. What are the causes? And what will be effects on society?
Nowadays there is a worrisome tendency that the number of pupils choosing to study the science-related subjects is inadequate. This tendency resulted from several causes and it obviously has numerous severe impacts on society
On the one hand, there is a variety of explanations for the shortage of science specialized students. First and foremost, science is considered as a difficult subject. It is irrefutable that there is a wide range of hypotheses, formulas and calculations in the scientific issues, which requires using higher cognitive skills including analysis and evaluation. Besides, science seems to be very fatigue and distress since learns need to devote a great deal of time and effort to it. Therefore, many student are being hesitated when thinking about this major. Another reason that is worth mentioning is the lack of practical experiments. There seem to be shreds of evidence that spending time in the laboratory has been quite unfamiliar with the science-based subject as the facilities do not allow it to happen. As a result, students learn mostly from textbooks and listening lectures, which allegedly monotonous and doctrinaire
Consequently, the shortage of science undergraduates leads to a knock-on effect on society as a whole. First of all, it associated with a lack of scientists and engineers in the near future who made a contribution to the development of one nation. Hence, the scientific and technological breakthrough is also less likely to happen due to the scarcity of talent in these fields. This worst-case scenario will not only the science field but also the other areas of the community. Take agriculture as an example. The agricultural productivity is increased at a slow rate since there will be hardly any scientific left in this field. In the second place, not enough students choosing to study science is synonymous with inadequate occupation distribution. An illustration of this is that the students will suffer from more competitive examinations to enter the non-science major. Furthermore, there will be higher unemployment rate and many student will be forced to work seasonal and low-paid jobs to earn for living
To sum up, since the science is considered as difficult and lack of practical experience, it is understandable that not every student want to be in this major. However, this will lead to several negative effects on not only the science fields but also the other areas. Moreover, there also higher unemployment rates due to the uneven job distributio
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 429, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to need'
Suggestion: to need
... very fatigue and distress since learns need to devote a great deal of time and effo...
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Line 3, column 494, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun student seems to be countable; consider using: 'many students'.
Suggestion: many students
...al of time and effort to it. Therefore, many student are being hesitated when thinking about...
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Line 5, column 933, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun student seems to be countable; consider using: 'many students'.
Suggestion: many students
...re will be higher unemployment rate and many student will be forced to work seasonal and low...
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Line 7, column 29, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r living To sum up, since the science is considered as difficult and lack of p...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, as a result, first of all, to sum up, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2126.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 404.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26237623762 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08707330112 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529702970297 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 680.4 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9681358562 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.894736842 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2631578947 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63157894737 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273178984882 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749168637227 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650448690465 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160374446485 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544318521782 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 429, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to need'
Suggestion: to need
... very fatigue and distress since learns need to devote a great deal of time and effo...
^^^^
Line 3, column 494, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun student seems to be countable; consider using: 'many students'.
Suggestion: many students
...al of time and effort to it. Therefore, many student are being hesitated when thinking about...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 933, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun student seems to be countable; consider using: 'many students'.
Suggestion: many students
...re will be higher unemployment rate and many student will be forced to work seasonal and low...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 29, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r living To sum up, since the science is considered as difficult and lack of p...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, as a result, first of all, to sum up, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2126.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 404.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26237623762 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08707330112 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529702970297 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 680.4 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9681358562 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.894736842 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2631578947 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63157894737 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273178984882 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749168637227 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650448690465 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160374446485 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544318521782 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.