It is observed that most government pay lot of money for the art . For instance , there are more and more paintings on sculpture seen on public places. Some people say that it is wrong and government should spend money on other important things .
To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Generally speaking , culture is the thread that binds a community together . It is reflection of human evolution and accumulation of all the human's experience till date that helps in shaping a society . Art and sculpture play a pivotal role in human civilization . It is found that , majority of government pay a huge amount of money for the art project . Many of people ponder that , it is wrong and government should expend money for other rudimentary aspects. I partially agree with this statement and I will discuss my own view regarding to this topic in approaching paragraphs.
To embark on , authority should spend money on art and sculpture because it can bring many positive things. First and for most , art and craft , reflects on the culture and tradition because when the government will use the art on public places so foreigners can see the tradition and custom of specific country and make public place irresistible. More over , investment in painting and sculpture promote the tourism and enhance the economy of nation . A report had been published by tourism and travel department of India and they had been printed that , approximately 24.35% increment in Indian tourism have been originated due to help of exotic tradition of India .
On the flip side , apart from the art government should also invest in other sectors equally , which is also responsible for storing G.D.P of nations such as education and health because in these sector , many country are lacking . Hence , if government will work on this so it will support financially to a nation . Moving further , authority should use money for sanitation and deposit money for adverse natural climaties like earthquakes, Tsunami and help country in crisis circumstance. A report had been published by the U.S.A times and they printed that , U.S.A submit 35.8 % of their profit for natural climaties rather than for art.
To be recaptiulated, as per I am concerned, administration should give equal importance to every domain is required with pro-life rate the growth and economy of country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, regarding, so, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13134328358 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85047209447 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561194029851 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4826899933 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.6 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86666666667 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 36.0 5.01903807615 717% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319705819237 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103286533352 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939652363344 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16620527915 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756942072946 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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