It is said that adulation food is key reason behind deteiated health of all age group masses how you agree or disagree with it

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It is said that adulation food is key reason behind deteiated health of all age group masses how you agree or disagree with it

Food adulation product to fail legal standard in the current time of technological advancement,one of the most pressing concerns is regarding the given topic that food quality fails by food adulation process? through this essay I shall explore my dimensions of this topic through this essay.it is clear and coherent representation.
To commence with ,food adulation due to intensely food through it inclined the flavour,taste of food . however ,due to intensely food many type of disease are develop . after that ,all that of adulation process addition of many chemicals that is the reason many type of disease has obtained from it.for example.eyes blindness type disease develop through food adulation that is the reason person suffer from this disease . furthermore it is very extremely condition for those person that suffer of eye blindness disease.
As apart from, food adulation including into. unintensely condition that is more dangerous as well as intensely food adulation . For example,it also into industrial processes due to it they also preserve the food longer time to addition of pesticide,fertiliser into the food after that food packaging than they introduce into marking for selling by customer.
As for as, food adulation due to natural farming is the Mani reason they induce chemicals due to ripening of crop that obtained many type of disease .they has many type of disadvantages obtained from it for example cancer is main serious . Cancer is so many dangerous disease due to it person suffer from many extremely condition after that due to this disease person diet earlier .
In summary, I believe that my point of view there are three type of food adulation process . however they has main extremely condition of food adulteration.moreover, through it many type of disease obtained from it.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, moreover, regarding, so, well, apart from, as for, for example, in summary, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26989619377 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02515438878 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.432525951557 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.3645813001 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.153846154 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 58.0 5.01903807615 1156% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138946784889 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701294924158 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537878838352 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0910262464518 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371710856748 0.056905535591 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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