junk foods cause of obesity
These days, many people eat junk food that is main cause of obesity. In this essay I will write some reasons of obesity.
First reason of obesity is passive lifestyle. There are many people who spend more than eight hours behind the computer and in the office. During the passive lifestyle people are never doing physical exercises that could avoid obesity also they become sedentary what is harmful for health. I think that people should do more work out that can help them keep shape of body.
Second reason is gluttony what is often happening with diabetics. Sometimes people eat more than need and it cause extra weight but people can escape it if they would do healthy diet that contain only green, fruits and vegetables that will provide good digestion. I think that people will not have any problems with weight while they will have healthy lifestyle.
Third reason of obesity is eating high-calorie meal that contains many protein and fat. For example cutlers, steak, hot dogs and hamburgers are related to it. I think that people should consume more milk products like cheese, yogurts and cream that contain more cereals.
Finally, there are many methods how to solve problems with obesity but main of them is sport because nothing can not replace sport.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, so, third, while, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1064.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90322580645 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10549157632 2.80592935109 75% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603686635945 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.5829027203 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8461538462 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6923076923 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151880283334 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512608327308 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864670237916 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0732691469248 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07315438539 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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