There are many shopping malls in the context of Nepal.They are big and small respectively.Those malls are easily found in every part of Nepal.Big malls have many goods and variety of goods are found there and in small shopping malls there are not not many goods and those goods which we need cannot be found easily.
According to the question,big shopping malls are replacing small because in big shopping malls there are many goods which can be found easily.People should not go to other shopping malls to buy same goods.Every goods can be found in one complex so big shopping malls are replacing small one.Similarly,the big shopping malls need huge amount of money to open and all the people don not have sufficient amount of money to establish to big shopping malls.This is also one of the reason of replacing small malls.
There are poor and rich people in our society.People are eager to show they are rich so they goes to big shopping malls which are standard.People don not want to show that they are poor so they start ignoring to small shopping malls.In this way,also the small shopping malls are being replaced.people are being rich day by day, so their standard is also increasing day by day.They choose standard shopping malls which suits them.This might also be the reason of being replaced of small shopping malls by big shopping malls.
In conclusion,we should respect all the malls because they all are trying to earn money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, similarly, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1197.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84615384615 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75163693888 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 176.041082164 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.388663967611 0.561755894193 69% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 350.1 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 61.0 20.2975951904 301% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 176.403656425 49.4020404114 357% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 299.25 106.682146367 281% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.75 20.7667163134 297% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21332571302 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133760013867 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615613822548 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133760013867 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615613822548 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.3 13.0946893788 247% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 26.48 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.7 11.3001002004 219% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.74 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 78.4519038076 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.4 10.1190380762 261% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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