Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion about this? Discuss with appropriate examples.
Nowadays large shopping malls are replacing the small shops. many developing cities all over the world is also developing their infrastructure in development of mall. it provides convenient environment to the customers. It is agreed that malls culture should be promoted. Malls culture is gradually improving day by day. This essay will discuss about the pros of the large shopping malls
To begin with, the infrastructure of the large shopping malls are attracted by the consumers by the facilities offered by the malls. For example, malls provide large parking place, all types of shops, food courts, entertainment ares and air condition. people can spend full day in the shopping mall with friends and families, it fulfills all the needs of the family members from children to adults
secondly, These days malls generate high revenue to the government when compares to small shops. it also provide employment opportunities and introduces the western culture to the people. so, to improve the business many people constructing the large shopping malls, by detecting the many small shops.
To conclude this, as the shopping malls gives many advantages to the people. Although there are some advantages with small shops like small business development. the advantages of shopping malls overweight it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, second, secondly, so, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1105.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 205.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39024390244 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79498148032 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 139.433497537 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560975609756 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 379.143842365 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.0405537089 50.4703680194 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7692307692 20.9669160288 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 7.25397266985 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.33497536946 206% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373340149946 0.242375264174 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140251429809 0.0925447433944 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124573798168 0.071462118173 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230084733438 0.151781067708 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487411569014 0.0609392437508 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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