Personal Development is the base for professional development and advancing in one’s career. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is important to get a good career in any professional personal development is important. Personal development is enhancing the prosperity to achieve anything career. In my view personal development is the base for professional development I agree with this statement. This essay elaborates the reason why personal development is useful.
To begin with, professional development can achieve from personal development by motivating themselves. Many companies are appointing for candidates not only by academic performances, moreover they examines the personal abilities like communication skills, performance with team, team developing skills, managing skills. These skills cannot learn in academics students should develop personally.
Secondly, many success people comes from the under developed areas and worked for development of nations. The personal problems in the surroundings and families may inflates them to work hard this personal experiences will help the people to work hard and successful personalities in the society. For example, top most industrialist in India Ambani is came from the small ruler area and developed his native village technically after his achievement.
By this it can be concluded, that many people are successful in their career by personal developments and personal observation. In a nutshell, it can told that, personal development is very essential to develop professionally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1221.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 207.0 242.827586207 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.89855072464 5.00649968141 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29329734006 2.71678728327 121% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6038647343 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.804823649 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.75 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.25397266985 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381046069697 0.242375264174 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18170929116 0.0925447433944 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0907039769243 0.071462118173 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261368733733 0.151781067708 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0977554058586 0.0609392437508 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.84 53.1260098522 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.9458128079 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.64 11.5310837438 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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