More and more students are studying at universities abroad, either because it is cheaper, or because they feel they can receive a better education, or because it will provide them with greater professional opportunities. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad. Support your arguments with reasons and/or examples from your own experience and observations.
These days traveling to other countries for studying is became fashionable in students. Studying in abroad universities is increased from past few years. In my opinion, studying abroad will provide better education than local universities,
To begin with, studying at abroad universities has many advantages to the students. Students can live independently by managing themselves in all cases like money, own decisions and time management. Students are exposed to the different cultures and customs. There are many positive aspects like leaning new languages and make new friend from other countries. Foreign universities offer better courses with excellent facility. This education will also provide good professional career and job opportunities. Although the fees and living expense are high many universities are providing scholarships for high aggregate students.
On the other hand, studies at abroad also have some disadvantages. Students may affect some psychological problems and negative effects ion their mental conditions this also causes depression. Studying at abroad is more costly than studying in home place. It is very unfamiliar and uncomfortable to adjust with new environment and new climate. If the students can’t manage the expenditure, it becomes the burden to the parents. There will be many expenses like tuition fee, living expenses, travel expenses, flight tickets etc.
To conclude this, there are many advantages with studying in abroad. Students will get better future opportunities by international degree. It is undeniable that the preference of studying abroad has its own benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, in all cases, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 241.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.7510373444 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03151720913 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605809128631 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.9532789216 50.4703680194 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.0 104.977214359 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3888888889 20.9669160288 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 7.25397266985 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243520334061 0.242375264174 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786457378694 0.0925447433944 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060306408504 0.071462118173 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157771294264 0.151781067708 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0150747118302 0.0609392437508 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.36 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.48 11.5310837438 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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