More and more students are studying at universities abroad, either because it is cheaper, or because they feel they can receive a better education, or because it will provide them with greater professional opportunities.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad. Support your arguments with reasons and/or examples from your own experience and observations.
Young generation keeps on opting world-class universities for the advancement of their career and to accomplish their futuristic goal. Many advantages outweigh disadvantage while selecting to study overseas.
To commence with, Youths are very sensible, optimistic, and goal-oriented. They know well in advance what they
have to achieve in their lives. Most of the colleges have greater infrastructure facilities; a library contains
abundant books on various subjects, cultural and language exposure from students from different countries. In addition
to this, they got industrial practical training on each and individual subject by the experts on that area. Lastly,
Innumerable professional opportunities facilitate by college seeing your past educational background and your field
of interest.
On the other hand, Even though you are a very intelligent student, you need to pay a huge sum of money to pursue your study. Furthermore, you have to be alone for a prolonged time and some sort of homesickness would be there when you live a long distance from your native country. However, Since various advantages are being attached to study abroad a couple of shortcoming students easily compensate.
To recapitulate, Since students are getting holistically develop and a myriad of favorable condition to thrive in their career, they are opting oversees colleges to complete their future dream.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, lastly, so, well, while, in addition, sort of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 205.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.1512195122 5.00649968141 123% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.77837549171 2.71678728327 139% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678048780488 0.580463131201 117% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 3.65517241379 274% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.1213922745 50.4703680194 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.625 104.977214359 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.625 20.9669160288 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 7.25397266985 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.12807881773 194% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0986987583019 0.242375264174 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483008130776 0.0925447433944 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335215096436 0.071462118173 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0459788900318 0.151781067708 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283358660384 0.0609392437508 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 12.6369458128 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 53.1260098522 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.9458128079 141% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.69 11.5310837438 162% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.81 8.32886699507 130% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 83.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 75.5 Out of 90
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