More and more students are studying at universities abroad, either because it is cheaper, or because they feel they can receive a better education, or because it will provide them with greater professional opportunities. Which one do you think is the most

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More and more students are studying at universities abroad, either because it is cheaper, or because they feel they can receive a better education, or because it will provide them with greater professional opportunities. Which one do you think is the most important reason?

Choose which position you most agree with and discuss why you chose that position. Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading

Nowadays, most of the pupils are selecting to go abroad and do the study which has attracted numerous controversies and drawn the attention of the people. It can be agreed that some, whilst on the other hand that perspective of that. This essay agrees that going abroad will help students both professionally and knowledge-wise. Firstly, this essay will discuss the benefits of going outside of the country and getting an education and secondly, it will shed some light on the drawback of studying abroad.

At the outset, there are numerous reasons why studying outside is advantageous because the student gets very good infrastructure along with a good placement offer and financial perk after successfully pass from these universities. Since good laboratories facilitate students to study properly with all the necessary equipment. For example, the University of Cambridge provides all modern facilities in its lab along with a very good internship to a big company. Therefore, it helps students to secure their future.

Nevertheless, there remain some drawbacks like doing graduation or post-graduation from the outside country is very expensive. Moreover, the pupil becomes alone from the family for a long period. Hence, sometime student will be psychologically disturbed. For instance, It has been seen that some of my friends who were studying abroad went into depression. Thus, it leads to a negative effect on their life.

In light of the above discussion, it can be concluded that there are myriad benefits for studying outside along with some drawbacks, but advantage outweighs the disadvantage.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 232, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...cessfully pass from these universities. Since good laboratories facilitate students t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 253.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41106719368 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03260724676 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604743083004 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4128041686 50.4703680194 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7857142857 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 7.25397266985 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179851078637 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056311147192 0.0925447433944 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366418756678 0.071462118173 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963429837342 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400319059188 0.0609392437508 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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