Nowadays people spend too much time at work to the extent that they hardly have time for their personal life. Do you agree with this statement? Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own experience.
Nowadays people spent lot of time at work instead of their personal life. Employees in the private sector don’t have time to spend with their family and loved once. This became a debeatable issue in this era.
To begin with, there are ample reasons behind this hectic life. Firstly, everyone want to get good name in their professional life as well as society, where as they left their personal life and family. Employees have a lot of endeavor to reach their goals. Secondly, excessive amount of work in today’s corporate culture required extra hours to complete the work in schedule time, because of this employees are working by sacrificing the family time and their personal leisure time. For instance my brother is working as software employee in a MNC company, he have a lot of work pressure to complete the assigned task with the short period of time, because of this, he not participating in any parties which held in family and relatives.
To address this issue, many eminent companies are providing a lot of amenities to their employees such as gym, sports area under the office building. So that employees can feel stress free and also providing the parities and travel tours with their family members
To conclude this, even though people are having the lot of work pressure by the organization to complete the project on time have become a inevitable part of our work environment. However, it is indispensable that we should not underestimate value and relationship.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 152, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...r professional life as well as society, where as they left their personal life and famil...
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Line 2, column 218, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun endeavor seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of endeavors'.
Suggestion: a lot of endeavors
...ersonal life and family. Employees have a lot of endeavor to reach their goals. Secondly, excessi...
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Line 2, column 398, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...e the work in schedule time, because of this employees are working by sacrificing th...
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Line 2, column 566, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
... software employee in a MNC company, he have a lot of work pressure to complete the ...
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Line 2, column 639, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...mplete the assigned task with the short period of time, because of this, he not participating ...
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Line 2, column 679, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'participates'.
Suggestion: participates
...period of time, because of this, he not participating in any parties which held in family and...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d travel tours with their family members To conclude this, even though people are...
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Line 4, column 138, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...omplete the project on time have become a inevitable part of our work environment...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t underestimate value and relationship.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 250.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66707630187 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.7390673757 50.4703680194 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.181818182 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7272727273 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0909090909 7.25397266985 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319988669845 0.242375264174 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130953766298 0.0925447433944 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797201629197 0.071462118173 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200199227484 0.151781067708 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102791553045 0.0609392437508 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.