Do you think that the rapid development of new technologies in recent years is a boon or curse for societies around the world? What is your opinion on this and support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
Nowadays technology is used everywhere. Technology is boom to the human life. All age groups of people are aware of using technology. people day is started with using technology. There are many advanced technologies in many inventions like computers and communication.
To begin with, computers are boon to the human because of computers, human life became more easy, with computer there are many pros to the people, they can use computes to store and reuse date and can check any information which stored in past, and other uses with computer is entertainment such as, watching movies and playing games. Moreover, it is also for corporate work in many companies. Secondly, another advanced technology is communication. Mobile phone and internet, by mobiles people can communicate very easily throughout the world and by using internet people can get any information about new inventions all over the world.
On the other hand, there are some disadvantages of using these advanced technologies. By using mobile phones, computers, television and internet children as well as adults are becoming lazy, and not participating in any physical activities and outdoor games. However, using this technology will have many problems in kids like eye sight, physically inactive. For example sitting in front of the internet and playing video games children are not using energy which causes obesity and overweight and losses fitness.
To conclude this, the advancements in the technologies have many advantages than disadvantages. But, people should control the using because excess using of anything is curse. Proper using of technology will provide many developments in the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...f people are aware of using technology. people day is started with using technology. T...
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Line 2, column 237, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
... can check any information which stored in past, and other uses with computer is entert...
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Line 3, column 327, Rule ID: EYE_BROW[1]
Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesight'.
Suggestion: eyesight
...gy will have many problems in kids like eye sight, physically inactive. For example sitti...
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Line 4, column 251, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ovide many developments in the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 20.9802955665 24% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 261.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43295019157 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90906801358 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563218390805 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 74.3378846467 50.4703680194 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.625 104.977214359 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3125 20.9669160288 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.075894758738 0.242375264174 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0314353856261 0.0925447433944 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.020775021082 0.071462118173 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0526088808832 0.151781067708 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0146422193842 0.0609392437508 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 53.1260098522 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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