Schools should prepare students for university, rather than for work, how far do you agree with this statement? Support your point of view with reason and/or example from your own experiences and observations
Now days many students are interested in higher studies at top universities. Students are interested to learn more to set good career. As they learn basics of work in schools, universities help them additionally who to interact with world. Schools should teach the students to the children
Firstly, when studying in the universities students will not have any spoon feeding they should learn by their own, by that they can learn new things. While studying in the other country’s universities students will interact with different regions people. So that students may learn new culture and traditions. For example, the students who completed their universities studies they can better job opportunities.
On the flip side of the coin, work is also a many factor of the students career. As the students go to work after the schools they will have a lot of experience then the university for instance, my personal experience when I joined in the work my friend continued the studies after 2 years he joined in same company which I have two years of experience and he as a fresher
From this it can be concluded that, schools should prepare the students for both the university and work, they should teach the students ability to get success in future whether in the work and university. The both scenarios will help the students in success to reach their goals
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, so, then, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1139.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 230.0 242.827586207 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95217391304 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75478274594 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 139.433497537 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508695652174 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 332.1 379.143842365 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 127.581542552 50.4703680194 253% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 113.9 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 7.25397266985 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206606846923 0.242375264174 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733414576504 0.0925447433944 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555559045665 0.071462118173 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138398118229 0.151781067708 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445448792323 0.0609392437508 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.32886699507 88% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 55.0591133005 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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