Do you think that the rapid development of new technologies in recent years is a boon or curse for societies around the world? What is your opinion on this and support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
Nowadays technology is used everywhere. Technology is boom to the human. Every age group is aware of technology, our day started with using technology. There are many advancement in the technology in many inventions like antibiotics, computers and communication.
To begin with, these days many people are using advanced medicines to secure their life and increasing the life span. Secondly, computers are the main boon to the human because of computers human life became easy, with computer there are many pros to the people, they can use computes to store and rewrite information, and other uses like entertainment such as watching movies and playing games. Moreover, it is also for corporate uses in many companies. Thirdly, another advanced technology is communication through mobile phone and internet. By internet world became so small, by internet people able to connect throughout the world.
On the other hand, there are some disadvantages of using these advanced technologies. By using mobile phones, computers, television and internet children as well as adults are becoming lazy, and not participating in any physical activities and outdoor games. However, using this technology will have many problems in kids like eye sight, physically inactive. For example sitting in front of the internet and playing video games children are not using energy which causes obesity and overweight and losses fitness.
To conclude this, the advancements in the technologies have many advantages than disadvantages. But, people should control the using because excess using of anything is curse. Proper using of technology will provide many developments in the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun advancement seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much advancement', 'a good deal of advancement'.
Suggestion: much advancement; a good deal of advancement
...tarted with using technology. There are many advancement in the technology in many inventions li...
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Line 5, column 327, Rule ID: EYE_BROW[1]
Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesight'.
Suggestion: eyesight
...gy will have many problems in kids like eye sight, physically inactive. For example sitti...
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Line 6, column 251, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ovide many developments in the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, for example, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 20.9802955665 38% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 257.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53307392996 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91916458947 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583657587549 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.9643186016 50.4703680194 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.875 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0625 20.9669160288 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.25397266985 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0687028843237 0.242375264174 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.030697756328 0.0925447433944 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0197977368054 0.071462118173 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0501127316898 0.151781067708 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0117467374548 0.0609392437508 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 53.1260098522 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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