Do you think that the rapid development of new technologies in recent years is a boon or curse for societies around the world? What is your opinion on this and support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
Many people believe that the fast advancement of technologies today is an advantage. However, other feel that it has several drawbacks for communities globally. In my perspective, it is because it makes life easier for the former and deteriorates the environment for the latter. This essay will discuss my justifications for the stated reasons.
To begin with, the advent of computers nowadays have helped replaced human beings in their efforts to finish their job. Industries today utilizes numerous machines that were used to be the work of people. Consequently, workers are now able to feel more relax and can provide an output at the shortest time. To illustrate, factory personnels in the past are manually packing the products while recently, various equipment were invented to the same.
On the other hand, the negative effects of proliferation of automated world cannot be ignored. People are experiencing climate change due to adverse impact of industrial pollution and waste. As a result, health of individuals as well the condition of mother nature is compromised. For example, according to recent study conducted on carbon emmissions that the atmosphere already goes beyond the limiting standard at 2 ppm.
To recapitulate, the transition to technological evolution has undisputedly made mankind experience the most convenient ways of their lives, despite that, ecological destruction still comes with it. Indeed, it is dependent on every citizen on how he will be dealing with the best materials ahead of him and making the most out of it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, so, still, well, while, for example, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32388663968 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98666357676 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68016194332 0.580463131201 117% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7811836286 50.4703680194 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9285714286 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6428571429 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.25397266985 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0750766638518 0.242375264174 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0225944303896 0.0925447433944 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0196118612869 0.071462118173 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0416155712214 0.151781067708 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237216382691 0.0609392437508 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.32886699507 123% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 55.0591133005 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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