Many people think that regions affect successful person. What is your opinion about native region and accomplished person’s influence on the region he belongs to.
Some people believe that region affects the success of the person. In my view, this opinion is not a correct one the native region is not influenced on the success of the person this essay is discussed about what are the factors that affect for a person success
Firstly, I believe that success of a person is dependent on the many factors such as, support from family members and friends, neibhours and surroundings, goals and ambitions for the person. For example, the children’s in the business man family he/she can learn the business strategies from his/her father from childhood and he/she may become a successful business persons and gets successful position in the society. Success is not depends on the native region it depends on environment. A poor person who lives in slums are can become a successful leader if he helps the people and earn the good position in the society.
Secondly, any think in life will depends in the hard work and commitment of the person. To get a respectable position in the society success is very important. For example, Many successful people in the world became successful after leaving there native place like Obama old president of USA. The new place teaches a lot of thing about the world and became successful
To conclude with this, there is no impact of the native regions on the successful persons. The success depends on the hard work and smart work of the person.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...scussed about what are the factors that affect for a person success Firstly, I believe t...
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Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'depend'
Suggestion: depend
...ety. Secondly, any think in life will depends in the hard work and commitment of the ...
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Line 3, column 316, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of things'.
Suggestion: a lot of things
...president of USA. The new place teaches a lot of thing about the world and became successful ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1184.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 244.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85245901639 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58617598684 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 139.433497537 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475409836066 0.580463131201 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 364.5 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 96.8116212032 50.4703680194 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.4 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.417393857963 0.242375264174 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176166113753 0.0925447433944 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113118188013 0.071462118173 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277692685773 0.151781067708 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126777910484 0.0609392437508 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.1260098522 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 55.0591133005 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.94827586207 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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