Certain kinds of music promote learning in their life. Agree or disagree?
It is important that certain kinds of music help for learning in life is always a debatable topic. Music is very beneficial the learning. I completely agree with this statement it improves our daily life. In my view music will improve concentration and memory skills.
Music is very a good way to improve memory skill and concentration which is very useful to children to concentrate on studies. Music gives great relaxation to mind and works as stress buster. Playing musical instrument like key board and guitar will help enhance their skills. Music will help the children with stage fear. For instance, if the anyone performing in any computation they can overcome the stage fear.
Similarly, children should improve the team work music learning also provides the team with band. There are ample advantages with the music for future great opportunities. It not only support financially, but also brings good recognition in the society. For example, music give good career in movie as playback singer, dubbing artist and music player and many more.
To conclude with this, people have many advantages with learning different music instrument or music. It also provides great future which help to survive not only nationally. It also exposes internationally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, similarly, so, for example, for instance, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 31.9359605911 66% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1068.0 1207.87684729 88% => OK
No of words: 203.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26108374384 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71422760168 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 139.433497537 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591133004926 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 379.143842365 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.5024630542 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.5241919559 50.4703680194 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.75 104.977214359 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6875 20.9669160288 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1875 7.25397266985 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 6.9802955665 186% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246192177421 0.242375264174 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807131287821 0.0925447433944 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07995643482 0.071462118173 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16132787465 0.151781067708 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917403015293 0.0609392437508 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 12.6369458128 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.34 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.3980295567 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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