In the last 20 years, there have been a significant development in the field of
Information Technology, for example, the World Wide Web and communication by
email. However, these developments in IT are likely to have more negative effects
than positive in the future.
To what extent do you agree with this view ?
It is unbelievable that the field of Information Technology has offered several
milestone innovations in the past few years. All these have radically comforted people around
the world. However, some argue that these developments can exhibit more harming
influences in future then being advantageous. If asked, I would disagree to a large extent with
such an opinion. My preference is argued further.
Out of all the reasons, the foremost one, I sell put forward is that of increased
production efficiency and time saving ability. It is a fact that businesses are hugely automated
for their tasks and this would continue in future, which would not only render better quality
of goods but also would be time efficient. Moreover, alike today, the coming years shall have
improved communication devices such as emails, video conferencing, virtual meetings,
efficient cell phones shall continue to connect people the fastest and also entertain them as
unending sources.
Additionally, people would have to travel less, work lesser and worry the least
regarding the professional as well as to a large extent, the personal operations. For instance,
students would be able to learn on a global skill without ever having a classrooms, the
agriculture processes that once required dozens of dozens of human workers shall be
automated, cost efficiency and work efficiency to farmers. The further medical discoveries
would save many lives and the offices might shrink in the laptop and palm tops.
However, it also must be kept in thought that more advanced society may become
increasingly dependent on all kinds of ITs. Technologies shall make them disabled in terms of
individual thinking, creativity and analysis. There is also a fear that human workers shall retain
less value in future. It is predicted that information technology shall dominate the mankind in
a threatening way.
Thus, it can be finally commented that although there are a few booming dangerous
due to the use and overuse of the information technology. I am sure no technologies shall
emerge as the times goes and will continue to simplify the comfort our lives at work at home
and everywhere.
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...el less, work lesser and worry the least regarding the professional as well as to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, then, thus, well, as to, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1855.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33045977011 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84544141758 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617816091954 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.8887888737 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.9375 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 24.0 4.38176352705 548% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11293170808 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0358280043136 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046196283264 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0298715187699 0.151304729494 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483277573015 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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