In cities and town all over the world the high volume of traffic is a problem.
What are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem ?
In the recent two to three decades, with the technological innovations and progress
in the field of automobiles, there have been swelling numbers of vehicles on the roads all
around the world. This has resulted in lot of traffic and this, posing a huge problem. There are
quite a few reasons for such a situation; however, some productive suggestions can resolve
the problem to a large extent. Both the aspects are discussed further.
Out of all the reasons, the most common is that there are more numbers of cars and
other private vehicles. This is because that cars, in the recent years, have become affordable,
and so more people buy. Also, cars are more of a dire need especially in the urban areas,
rather than a status symbol or a luxury as in the past. The other cause that can be pointed out
is the unreliability of the public transport facility, it is always overcrowded. Therefore, instead
of waiting endlessly and packed like sardines, people use their own vehicles, thus causing
traffic congestion. People today, prefer to travel in comfort as per their time and with
flexibility.
Discussing the remedies for the high volume of traffic, the foremost suggestion is to
upgrade the public transport facilities. They should be more efficient, more flexible,
comfortable and reliable. This and attract more people to commute by them. Another idea is
to levy congestion tax. This can help to radically reduce traffic. A good example of this is
London. Where there is a penalty for overcrowding roads, there has been a remarkable
decrease seen as a result. Collecting tall taxes also can be a good suggestion. Moreover, there
can be smart ways applied. For instance, traffic smart phone application suggests the most
efficient time saving routes and manufacturing of smart cars.
Thus, to conclude, it can be said that indeed the traffic volume is a big issue in the
world at present. However, it should be immediately addressed by the government of the
nations and the vigilant citizens so as to save the world from severe environmental damage,
fuel crisis and slow moving traffic.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07977207977 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7646838734 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57264957265 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.1777892832 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0454545455 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9545454545 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 24.0 4.38176352705 548% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264564558834 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728076389828 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069505049517 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0645682543312 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683842156077 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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