In recent years, there has been a considerable rise in crimes committed by young
people in cities.
What has caused this ? What solutions can you suggest ?
It must be accepted that nowadays, there has been a significant increase in episodes
of offences committed by the young especially in the urban areas. This is a fearful situation.
There are many reasons for such a situation; however, a few productive suggestions can solve
the situation to a large extent. The causes and the measures are discussed further.
Examining the reasons, the most common is to live up and enjoy the glamour of the
big city. It has been observed that young people get easily obsessed by all the pleasures of the
urban life such as the discos, the clubs and other fun attractions. For this they need money
and so to earn fast bucks, they commit crime. The other prime reason is drugs and alcohol.
Commit crime out of a strong desire to fulfil their habits. Poverty and unemployment in this
age group are another driving forces for the offences.
However, a few measures can really help to overcome the situation. The most
important step is to keep strict vigilance at public places and place of entertainment. Closed
circuit cameras, more police force, special police patrolling at night, for instance, can
effectively help to reduce criminal activities. Another suggestion is to try and bifurcate the
youth energy constructively, by organising events such as dance competitions, treasure hunts,
marathons and other fulfilled activities. Creating more part time jobs and raising education
level among the young people can also help in a large way to reduce crime by the young.
All in all, it can be said that certainly there are swelling numbers of crime in the
meteors and cities. To live up to the glamour and earn fast money – young people commit
crime. However, strict vigilance and bifurcating youth energy can help remedy the situation. I
believe, this debate must be considered on a serious note.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, really, so, well, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06493506494 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69240230846 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548701298701 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.597972459 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1052631579 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2105263158 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05263157895 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.38176352705 479% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166450760332 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498480898995 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031740271068 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0454619671853 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325612032951 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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