Latest medical technology is responsible for the human’s life expectancy. Do you think most people will see this as a positive development? What are the disadvantages of an ageing population for individuals and society?
In recent years, there has been a growing debate about whether nowaday medical technology is improved for life expectancy. It is put the forward by some people that it is advantages. The opponent, on the other hand, argues that there are several drawbacks. In this essay will identify both the benefits and drawback surrounding this issue before coming to a reasoned conclusion.
To begin with the point in favour of live longer in human life, the most effective one is perhaps that improved medical technology. In other words, the success of medical skill make human health life and live longer is wonderful. According to statistics revealed by the United Nations clearly, demonstrate that about 60 percent of Australian prefer to follow this trend.
Despite the advantages discussed above, there are a number of negatives arising out of the ageing population for individual and society as well. One of the most conspicuous disadvantages is that overpopulation could happen in the future. This is evidenced by the fact that people live longer them before could make a serious problem for live. For instance, overwhelmed rely on high medical technology could exploring live condition because human are life longer them before this is an evident lack of food will show in the future.
To sum it can be observed that there are both benefit and ill effect in relation to whether good medical technology is helpful in somewhere for society. To choose which side I am on, I believe that advantages surpass the disadvantages, owing to the reason discussed above.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 408, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'explore'
Suggestion: explore
...d rely on high medical technology could exploring live condition because human are life l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, for instance, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09338521401 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72432456107 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568093385214 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9185834461 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.692307692 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297558493901 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910681289688 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635128906634 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159471121394 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739319741308 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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