What do you think about the influence of the Internet on children? With internet being readily available to children in the present times when compared to the previous, do you think the internet will have negative effects or negative influence on children?
In recent years, there has been a growing debate whether that many people think the Internet is affecting and influence on children life. It is put forward by some people that it is advantageous. The opponent, on the other hand, argues that there are several drawbacks. In this essay will identify both the benefits and drawbacks surrounding this issue before coming to the reasoned conclusion.
To begin with, the point in favour of the Internet is the effects or influence on children life, the most effective one is perhaps that the Internet could help fast learning and connecting most teacher and students together. In other words, live in countryside area students could fast reach resource and have flexible learning time with an online tutor. According to statistics by the United Nations clearly, demonstrate that about 80 percent of Australian prefer to follow this trend.
Despite the advantages discussed above, there are a number of negative arising out of the Internet cause some problem as well. One of the most conspicuous disadvantages is that online socity is an open area could effecting children''s mind as well as a security problem. This is evidenced by the fact that most children have no knowledge to deal with the crime problem. For instance, some of the websites could include violence or sexual abuse if underage child does not know how to avoid them it could affect their life.
To sum, it can be observed that there are both the benefits and ill effect in relation to whether the Internet is good for children or notd. To choose which side I am on, I believe that advantages surpass the disadvantages, owing to the reason discussed above.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'effect'
Suggestion: effect
...hat online socity is an open area could effecting childrens mind as well as a security pr...
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Line 5, column 383, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...l with the crime problem. For instance, some of the websites could include violence or sexu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, for instance, as well as, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96085409253 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60653260749 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580071174377 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4316807184 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.230769231 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256207489657 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788448990026 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834919762217 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144202722842 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245710641358 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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