Do you think the consumer should avoid over packed products or is it the responsibility of producers
In recent years, the variety and selectivity of commodities increase the number of goods that are excessively packaged by the industry in order to increase sales. It is put forward by some people that consumer should have a responsibility to avoid this problem. On the other hand, believe that producers also should stop to over-packing any of product. In this essay will point out the main point this issue and sum up a reasoned conclusion.
To begin with, many manufacturer over-packing in order to increase profit. However, this consumption pattern is very welcome in customers shopping way. Because they think good product equally nice package. As this point can see producers for selfish interests make a major problem such as overwrapping product.
There are some arguments point out most customers should have common sense and morality, due to most over-wrapping product almost made by plastic. To avoid shopping over-packeing product can help less influence the environment in the future.
In conclusion, it can be observed that there are both the argument up against each other, there are strong and valid points on both view. I believe that we should more care about our environment and avoid over-packaged no matter you are a producer or customer.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun manufacturer seems to be countable; consider using: 'many manufacturers'.
Suggestion: many manufacturers
... reasoned conclusion. To begin with, many manufacturer over-packing in order to increase profi...
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Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...very welcome in customers shopping way. Because they think good product equally nice pa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1063.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 205.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18536585366 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86671600933 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629268292683 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8391886332 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5833333333 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0833333333 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34554223904 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11791969452 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102071269291 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192699221279 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324498390532 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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