Some developed countries have spent billions of dollars on space research. Some people consider this to be an irresponsible attitude since millions of people on Earth are suffering from hunger. What is your opinion
In recent years, there has a growing debate whether many developed countries are spent billions of dollars on space research. It is put forward by some people that it is advantageous. the opponents, on the other hand, argue that there are several drawbacks. In this essay will identify both benefits and drawbacks surrounding this issue before coming to reasoned conclusion.
To begin with the point in favour of exploring in space, the most effective one is perhaps that our environment is damage in this day. In other words, many scientists are researching another plaint for human living. According to statistics revealed by the United Nations clearly demonstrate that about 100 percent of Australian prefer to follow this trend.
Despite the advantages discussed above, there are a number of negatives arising out of west billions of dollars for unknown world discover as well. One of most conspicuous disadvantages is that in our world some people are suffering from hunger. This is evidenced by the fact that the developed countries should help any poor country to avoid hunger. For instance, the money should help in the third world country, because there has about 80 percent of children have no clean water can drink or healthy food can eat.
To sum, it can be observed that there are both benefits and ill effect in relation to whether spent money in a proper way is important. To choose which side I am on, I believe that advantages surpass disadvantages, owing to the reason discussed above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, third, well, for instance, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02788844622 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67264465946 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605577689243 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1346092484 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0769230769 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25016232474 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819438397262 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823304570197 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13006109757 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845815728631 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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