Do you think consumers should avoid over-packaged products or it is the responsibility of producers to avoid extra packaging of products? give
your views and relevant examples with your own experience.
Packaged goods has become a huge threat to the environment. Over packaging of goods should be reduced by producers as well as People should avoid consumption of packaged goods as they will be harmful for themselves and environment. This essay will discuss on why packaging should be avoided and what alternate methods can be made to avoid threats.
Nowadays, people are attracted towards commodities that seems to have attractive packing as there are many brands. Plastic contributes a high amount for packing goods. Once after the product is consumed people tend to throw away as garbage. A recent report published that 70% of garbage is accumulated from plastics used in packaged goods. Since these wastes are non-bio-degradable they are burnt. For example, in a remote place near Chennai garbage is being dumped and among them plastics are not degradable they are burnt. This results in polluting the air and a threat to the people who inhale it.
On the other hand producers can make several measures to reduce the packaging of products by replacing the plastics with eco-friendly substance like paper etc. This could also reduce the amount of preservatives and additives used. Restaurants could replace their plastic container with aluminum foils which could also help in garbage reduction. For example, A super market nearby has replaced the plastic cover with paper bags for several goods. Paper is recyclable and does not cause any harm to environment.
In a way we can conclude that it is the responsibility for both consumer and producers to avoid over packaging and packaged goods to save and preserve the Environment and also to promote alternate materials that are bio-degradable and eco-friendly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, well, for example, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20938628159 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86543008461 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552346570397 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.4225891838 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1875 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3125 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9375 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226861709292 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656134348105 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789943966651 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147924597229 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805237681556 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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