The leaders of most organizations tend to be older people. However, some argue that younger people make better bosses.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is common to see bosses being elderly in most enterprises around the world. Some people prefer young leaders to be in the executive branch of an organization. In my opinion, running a business or a country requires a lot of skills from a boss.
Younger people are eager to learn and keep up with modern world so that there may be an assumption that they can be more beneficial leaders to organizations. In fact, older people living in this digitalized society may not know well about all the technology available to make businesses or other governmental bodies successful in functioning. So, younger generations who were born during the internet age are more likely to have better computer skills than their elder counterparts. Added to this is a hunger towards innovations with risks. Leaders of 50 or more years are generally afraid of taking risks because they know how hard it is to control and build such a big organization. However, youth probably do not think about all aspects when making decisions which is one of the most important skills that a leader should possess.
There are valid reasons for why younger leaders cannot be given permission to control the whole organization. Firstly, they lack experience. To be more specific, leaders are defined as those who acquired good knowledge for decades beginning from scratch. So younger individuals should have a career leader to be a boss in the long run. Moreover, though older individuals working as leaders in companies are full of experience, they know how to communicate with employees, make urgent decisions if possible, care not only for themselves but also for the entire company, and teach inexperienced individuals to be leaders. Although they are slow on the intake, they can guarantee easy solutions to problems with their problem-solving skills that are highly valued in today’s work environment.
In conclusion, I believe that young generation has a lot to learn about leadership. Meanwhile, let older bosses do what they are doing.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09337349398 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90830215761 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593373493976 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.728045727 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4705882353 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5294117647 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253405050821 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796511003682 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064226250061 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157290989703 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368775986251 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.