Some argue that patriotism is the primary cause of wars globally. Others feel that it serves to prevent less ethical politicians from running a country and starting wars.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In general, patriotism is a matter of loyalty of one to a country. Some may think that it can be the main source of wars around the world while others believe that corrupt politicians and wars will be limited with it. In my view, patriotism is a must because it gives freedom and opportunities.
There is a school of thought believing that patriotic individuals cause global wars. It is primarily connected to history of one nation over another. Logically, if one country was under colony of another for several hundreds of years, after independence they would claim that the country is theirs. It is true that people having their freedom are more likely to start wars in order to maintain their independence and status as a country. And when colonists try to get all things back from a free state, war will be obvious. Moreover, they have rights to save their nation because no giant state will take care of local people and traditions, instead they aim at destroying what the country has. Therefore, patriots can start battles so as to save their right to live without limitation.
However, patriotism may give a spark to start a war to some degree, it plays an important role in building a powerful country. As patriotic acts depend on loyal actions, many people will try to be righteous and run the government with quality knowledge. It is common to see this situation happening with Russia which is a country with nuclear weapons. These weapons can only be created with loyal people who seek knowledge to save their country from outer dangers. And now, other countries are afraid of attacking Russia since they know it will be a mistake to do so. Russia does not need to combat with other nations for if there is real danger, it can be stopped through a click of a button.
In conclusion, although patriotism may ignite wars, it protects the whole country with right policy.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'thinks'.
Suggestion: thinks
...f loyalty of one to a country. Some may think that it can be the main source of wars ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 734, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
.... Therefore, patriots can start battles so as to save their right to live without limita...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, as to, in conclusion, in general, in my view, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76524390244 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54936209667 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576219512195 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0647513437 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9411764706 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2941176471 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52941176471 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2111342297 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682099559082 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465310916459 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13082348556 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501354407807 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'thinks'.
Suggestion: thinks
...f loyalty of one to a country. Some may think that it can be the main source of wars ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 734, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
.... Therefore, patriots can start battles so as to save their right to live without limita...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, as to, in conclusion, in general, in my view, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76524390244 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54936209667 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576219512195 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0647513437 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9411764706 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2941176471 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52941176471 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2111342297 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682099559082 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465310916459 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13082348556 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501354407807 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.