Learning english at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out.In your opinion is it important for everyone to learn English. Should we try to ensure the survival of local l

Over the past two decades English language has grown up in all over the countries and it has become a connecting language for the countries . The English language has become mandatory in today's world. At the same time we should give importance to our local languages. In my opinion English should be studied by every person of a country

To begin with, the English language is necessary as it works confidently. where ever we travel we can't learn all the local languages of every country. where as the students of today's decay want to learn at abroad or travel the world additionally if you want a job or an admission in good universities for post-graduation we need to made up ourselves to talk in English language likewise the books magazines newspapers with an interesting concept comes in English only.

however, there is a slight fall of the percentage of people who learn local languages. In spite of that Universities and the government should take action upon it by accounting almost 25% of domination in local languages where as it can be used in local business language as we should try to made up survival of the local language where we live ,as most of the mother tongue will be that only

In conclusion, I prefer every person to learn the bridge language as it benefits a lot in future uh where as we should try to figure rise the percent of local languages

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, likewise, so, in conclusion, in my opinion, in spite of, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1136.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67489711934 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71624553155 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514403292181 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 140.028959058 49.4020404114 283% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 142.0 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.375 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.375 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288866726303 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144754616962 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659379757622 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183729112427 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218569766893 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.4 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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