In contemporary society, people tend to learn english more that other local languages, but people should carry their mother tongue because it may dye out. In my opinion, schools should include in their curicculum to teach English due to the union of countries. However, it is more importannt that saving our local languages, this is our stem that must to mention. This essay will discuss those given views to understand the local languages value.
In the one hand, Learning English is important to communicate other counties' people. Because it can give opportunity to study abroad and more. For example, people who studied in their own country and taught by their own language have less opportunity to globalize other more developed countries' people. English gives person to improve his or her abilities more.
in the other hand, people should protect and save their mother language more than anything. Because it is inherited by ancient times to until present. Local language has its own non-replaceable value and culture. Throught the local language it taught a lot about their cultures. If people stop using their language in their school, it can push that language to the extinction. Singaporians, for instance, their local language is already destroyed by English spoken new generation.
In conclusion, nowadays, children prefer to study English more than their own languages. In my opinion, people should try to learn English and their mother language both and should inherit their local languages to the next generation. School subjects do not need to taught by English and all world countries should remain with their own local languages is the best way to globalize and share each other their own cultures throught their languages
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 348, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
... local languages, this is our stem that must to mention. This essay will discuss those ...
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Line 3, column 312, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'gives'' or 'gif's'?
Suggestion: gives'; gif's
...ore developed countries people. English gives person to improve his or her abilities ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
... improve his or her abilities more. in the other hand, people should protect a...
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Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...eir mother language more than anything. Because it is inherited by ancient times to unt...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22419928826 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58502653348 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508896797153 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7939417142 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3529411765 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5294117647 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82352941176 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236619756173 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947842546675 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633086702619 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171744873988 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477150337936 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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