Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local language. If these are not taught many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English ? Should we try to ensure the survival of local language and, if so, how ?
Is the learn English too prominent as compared to the local language? It is believed that without English most of the human life is imposible to live. However, I think for better business opportunities and for overseas education it is necessary to learn English but we also initiate the presistence of local language.
Admittedly, why i believe that learn English is important? So, requirement for better business is the primary reason behind this trend because every organisation required a that candidate who have the effective English skills since there majority of customers speak in English that is why to deal with these type of clients business has required well English learner. For instance, in India near about 40% graduates were unable to get better job place only because of their lack of skills in english. Secondly, for overseas education it is must to have better English for example the USA and Canada is known for their better education and to study in such countries it is requirement to get high score in English subject.
Moreover, beside from the importance of learning English the survival of local language is equally important. That is why, to preserve the native language it is necessary to take some valueable efforts such as school organize the book fair in which all the books should be written in the native language and some speeches are also prepared that convey the message to remember the mother tongue. Furthermore, people should communicate in their mother tongue because owing to this they never forget their language and it is also assist to give their comming genration as a gift. So, these aforementioned efforts helps to preserve the local language.
In conclusion, I reitrate that the above discussed essay covered the two aspects, the importance of learning English include better job placement and overseas study and another aspect cerntain steps that should be taken for the survival of the local language.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'assisted'.
Suggestion: assisted
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10591900312 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63365009245 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510903426791 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.4920399154 49.4020404114 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.583333333 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.75 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0833333333 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314036799902 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146840044681 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102575233077 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210174212231 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462691806601 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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