The pie chart below shows where energy is used in a typical Australian household and the table shows the amount of electricity used according to the numbercof occupants

Essay topics:

The pie chart below shows where energy is used in a typical Australian household, and the table shows the amount of electricity used according to the numbercof occupants.

At fleeting glance the pie chart and table chart depicts the information regarding household energy use in Australian and amount of electricity used in a typical Australian home. The data is calibrated in percentile and kilowatt hours accordingly.

Overall, the most striking feature apparent from this presentation is that maximum household energy used by heating and cooling. However, the uncausal feature that cannot be ignored is that minimum energy used by stand by power.

Highlighting the presentation it is clear that, the maximum household energy in Australia used by heating and cooling was 33% and followed by water heating with 25% while carried by other appliances with 16%. However, the minimum household power used by stand by power was 3%. In Australia household energy used by lighting and fridges and freezers was same 7%.

Turning to table chart, amount of electricity used by single person in a typical Australian home was 5000 - 6000 kilowatt hours per year, whereas two people use a similar amount or not much more. A three - person used 7500 - 10000 kilowatt electricity in Australian home. Amount of electricity was 12000 - 16000 used by 6 or more person in a typical Australian home.

Votes
Average: 8.7 (2 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, however, regarding, so, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1022.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21428571429 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76208254764 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515306122449 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.0 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.7169217955 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.2 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401140440577 0.215688989381 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177717761326 0.103423049105 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123030684087 0.0843802449381 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258303620109 0.15604864568 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102276922804 0.0819641961636 125% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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