The pic chart below shows where energy is used in a typical Australian household, and the table shows the amount of electricity used according to the number of occupants.
The given pie chart and the table compare the percentage of using energy in different sectors and the total number of electricity was used by several people in Australia.
It can be deemed that the power was occupied by 38% in heating and cooling system, while other sources were stayed in 3% to 25%.
First of all, individuals were using and water energy in heating and cooling heating sectors more than
In others by 38% and 25% namely while no more than 7% power were used for fridges and freezer as
well as lighting. Moreover, in the sector of cooking and stand by power were occupied by 4% and 3% respectively which were almost similar. Therefore, 16%. power were used by other appliances. However, 5,000 to 6,600 kWh were occupied by 1 person in home which were increased by more 2,500 kWh when 2 individuals were stayed. At last, but not the least, 3 people were used 7,500 to 10, 000 kWh whereas 6 or more human were occupied by 12,000 to 16,000 kwh in a year in Australia.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 156, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Power
...ch were almost similar. Therefore, 16%. power were used by other appliances. However,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54748603352 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38545523522 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558659217877 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.9065527191 43.030603864 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.285714286 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5714285714 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 5.23603664747 229% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117209978223 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646694198993 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0898039393652 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0930359585174 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0961808849971 0.0819641961636 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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