The pie chart below shows where energy is used in a typical Australian household, and the table shows the amount of electricity used according to the number of occupants. Smmerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates the distribution of the energy used for daily purposes in an average australian household and the table gives information about how much electricity is used based on the number of inhabitants.
Overall, it is evidence that the energy usage rate in australian families is mainly for heating and cooling. In addition, the consumption of electricity inclines with a rise in the number of people.
The consumption rate of heating and cooling makes up the largest of all, with a figure being 38%. Similar changes, but to a lesser extent, can be seen in the figure for water heating which accounts for a quarter of total energy use. Conversely, the figure for other appliances only reaches 16% and 7% for each lighting and freezers, while cooking and standby power use negligible amounts, merely 4% and 3% respectively.
it is clear that the amount of electricity used per capita reduces as the number of occupants increases. By the figures, a single-person household consumes 5000 to 6000 kWh per year, whereas a couple uses a bit higher, between 6000 to 8000 kWh annually. Similarly, but to a higher extent, families having 3 members use 7500 to 10000 kWh in a year and a household consisting of 6 or more members residing consumes between 12000 to 16000 kWh yearly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: It
...mounts, merely 4% and 3% respectively. it is clear that the amount of electricity...
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...rs use 7500 to 10000 kWh in a year and a household consisting of 6 or more member...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, similarly, so, whereas, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1073.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.899543379 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84486246173 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593607305936 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6592033566 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.222222222 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 5.23603664747 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249926835588 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104296809484 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0883421866963 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157537973204 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0893716856462 0.0819641961636 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.