Learning to play team sports is an important part of a child’s education. Do you agree or disagree? Give reason for your answer. And include any relevant experience from your own knowledge.
It is an irrefutable fact that sports are essential in a school's curriculum. Some people believe that playing sports in a team is more beneficial for children rather than playing individually. Since the objective of learning is all-around development, I fully agree with this statement. The following paragraphs will highlight my personal perspective along with relevant examples.
To commence with the advantages of playing sports in teams, first and foremost, it facilitates the development of valuable social skills such as teamwork and communication. For example, while playing football, children have to express themselves and overcome their shyness, driven by the same goal - to win. Given the fact that in today's society interpersonal skills are of overriding importance, children will benefit more if they learn them at a young age. Similarly, playing team sport enables children to feel that they belong to a team; thus, they should take certain responsibilities. As a result, they become good and responsible members of society.
Moreover, children have more fun playing together with their peers rather than alone. This can result in liking physical activities in the long run. For instance, during my school years, I used to hate doing morning exercises at home. Nevertheless, exercising with my classmates at school was more fun and enjoyable.
To put it in a nutshell, I am convinced that playing team sports facilitates a more comprehensive learning environment for children standing them in good stead. Children as humans are sociable beings; ergo, naturally, they perform best while playing in a team.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, nevertheless, similarly, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43083003953 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03436820686 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604743083004 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9192505158 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8666666667 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15428283563 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532733145195 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418065739534 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104512197284 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444854125377 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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