Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Recently, the striking downfalls from the regulation of speaking a foreign language have become an ongoing topic of debate in many parts of the world. It is a common belief that living in a country, which does not allow to apply any languages from abroad, can bring many huge benefits to broaden knowledge about exotic cultures. Nevertheless, there is a more persuasive argument that various social, as well as practical problems far, outweigh its advantage for several reasons.
On the one hand, lack of a high level of knowledge and expertise about one country’s language and costumes can contribute a decline to the hospitality of the locals. Specifically, because of word-limit, people call the older generations in an informal way. As a result, they can be considered as unrespected ones toward the elderly and make them feel distasteful at the first face-to-face meetings. For example, in some accidental cases, teenagers landing in an overseas country without much awareness of formal greetings with adults or the elderly can entail an unpleasant conversation the first time they meet. To be more precise, they call their peer’s parents as “guy” or “bro” instead of the formal ones.
On top of that, grasping an understanding of how to justify personal thoughts and clarify goals plays an indispensable role from a practical perspective. To put it another way, when one expresses a desire to be proficient at Microsoft Word and ask for help from others, who have to deal with language obstacles on a daily absis, they cannot perceive effectively. This leads to the reduction of work productivity on computers. According to the Oxford survey, approximately 75% of employees, who on top of the ranking, search for the information related to their tasks at hand on the Internet, rather than asking the native citizens.
To sum up, facing a language barrier can result in serious trouble in society and practical thorns. I suggest that the government of each country should place as much importance on international languages as they do on other problems that still exist in their country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 221, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'applying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: applying
...ving in a country, which does not allow to apply any languages from abroad, can bring ma...
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Line 3, column 237, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an informal way" with adverb for "informal"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...imit, people call the older generations in an informal way. As a result, they can be considered as...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, nevertheless, so, still, well, for example, as a result, as well as, to sum up, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1766.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13372093023 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94711246421 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616279069767 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4503850905 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.142857143 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183497889718 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577974776785 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459179939753 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116810320061 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591335465865 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.