Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Moving to a foreign land, we might find ourselves being alienated from others as we cannot comprehend all the strange syllables and vowels. Some might see it as a threat to our social and daily life. Nonetheless, I strongly uphold the view that human interactions should not be restricted by the language itself when there is non-verbal language and people are generally accepting.
The power of unspoken languages, or body languages, lies in its fundamental setting of being acquired by all human beings as their inborn traits. Our ancient ancestors sent signals to each other by waving their arms and legs as we sometimes see in comedies. Furthermore, we also discovered the significance of facial expressions -- brows frowned and teeth grinned, we know who not to irritate in avoidance of another argument. While we might not be able to convey our feelings and thoughts with words, our counterparts may still understand us by getting to the most primitive side of human beings.
Yet, undeniably, not knowing a language creates troubles since the minds of two are not well connected. Still, we shall not underestimate the level of acceptance of people; most give patience and kindness toward others when they see the efforts we put into being a part of the microcosm. For example, staying at host families gives one the most valuable experience adjusting to the new environment and acquiring the new language. Moreover, in an era when advanced translation gadgets come in handy, the perceived language barrier is considerably lowered.
In conclusion, albeit language is a potential obstacle, it is not essentially a conundrum which we should mind gravely. As long as one is open-hearted and amicable, more importantly, like a child coming to the new world, our thoughts will always be heard and understood.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, moreover, nonetheless, so, still, well, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13851351351 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92444740301 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638513513514 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6873898764 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0432296877085 0.244688304435 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0180081740999 0.084324248473 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.019427874569 0.0667982634062 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0287236017756 0.151304729494 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175047965682 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.