Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The journey of life prepares us with countless experiences of ups-and-downs which sometimes cause frustration and sadness. Often are we told to take everything in as they are, yet there are people who insist on altering the circumstances for the better. As every adversity is personal, I believe people should respond to it in their own preferences.
Life itself is uncertainty; we should prepare for whatever comes to us with a generous heart. Despite being educated to plan ahead by parents and society, we can never manipulate every factors in our life -- billions of people have their blueprints laid out for this year regarding their career, study and gatherings with loved ones, only to be suspended or terminated by the epidemic. However, as much as they acknowledge the temporariness of such catastrophe, people learned to understand and accept the situation with time.
Nonetheless, acting proactively in face of difficulties is also one ideal approach, as changes are essential to maintain an equilibrium of our mentality and move on to next stage of life. Going through a heartbreak, one might feel tormented and hopeless. Since the die is cast, come choose to pacify his/her soul through actions such as a solitary trip or a makeover. It is the positive and initiative attitude that enables one to carry on with life.
At the nadir of fortune, people react differently to ease themselves from the sufferings. While there is not an universal solution, we needs only to seek our own answer so as to experience a transient life of no repents.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 124, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'Often' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: Are Often
...ometimes cause frustration and sadness. Often are we told to take everything in as they a...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 110, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...from the sufferings. While there is not an universal solution, we needs only to se...
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Line 7, column 136, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'need'
Suggestion: need
... there is not an universal solution, we needs only to seek our own answer so as to ex...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 170, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...n, we needs only to seek our own answer so as to experience a transient life of no repen...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, nonetheless, regarding, so, while, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04651162791 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95716097996 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643410852713 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9431594084 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108328789601 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0397466510759 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484564041461 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0616367802787 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169550344854 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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