Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

Essay topics:

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The trend of moving abroad for work or study related purposes are increasing tremendously these days. Some people opine that a person will face social and practical problems in a country where they have to speak a foreign language. This essay will discuss that why the person could face problems due to linguistic barriers but why the technological advances and rules can decrease the problems to a great extent.

To begin with, each country around the world has its own language that increases the complexity for foreigners living in that country. The day to day activities are engaged in a host country's native language and it gets nearly impossible to socialize in there without having good command on their language. The racists can be found anywhere and not having a command on their language can give them a feeling of disrespect that can increase the chances of violence. Moreover, the individual can face a difficulty in finding a job because most of the companies in that country give preference who has a good command over their tongue. For instance, my cousin faced a big trouble while finding an occupation in Germany because of linguistic barrier. Therefore, it is mandatory to learn the language of the country in which someone is intended to move to.

On the other hand, a lot of things have been done in the recent decades in order to provide convenience for the foreigners. Most of the countries these days require the foreigners to give their language test to prove their language ability prior travelling to that country. Most of the time they offer online classes to individuals. For instance, in order to work or study in UK, the person has to show their command on English through IELTS test. In addition, a large number of apps are introduced in the market that can convert the speech to the intended language. Hence, the efforts done recently has decreased the language complexity for most of the people in the overseas countries.

In conclusion, most of the people travel abroad to seek fortune. This essay discussed that why the individual can face language barriers while abroad but why the recent efforts can decrease it to some extent. In my opinion, I partially agree with the above statement that if a person travels to foreign country without having a good command of their native language can face certain difficulties but due to the recent efforts the hurdle has been reduced to great extent.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 462, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...nglish through IELTS test. In addition, a large number of apps are introduced in the market that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand, to a great extent

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2025.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 413.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90314769976 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59956201718 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464891041162 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 632.7 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4971909226 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9444444444 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.05555555556 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243257092574 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745336402675 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740370182588 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160159053925 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600021739393 0.056905535591 105% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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