Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
To what extent the children should be allowed to make decisions about their own choices is a controversial issue. Some people opine that giving too much freedom to children about making their own choices will make him ending up being a selfish member of society while others claim that they should have to be allowed to a certain extent to make their decisions. This essay will discuss that why limiting the children to make their own preferences is good but why it is indispensable for the parents to give them freedom to some extent to decide on their own life matters.
To begin with, most of the children in the world ends up being a selfish and rude due to fact that they have been too liberal to make their own decisions. Parents fulfill their every wish and desire and due to this they develop a feeling of superiority over other members of a family and ends up being careless and irresponsible. For instance, my nephew wants each and everything his sister possess without caring a little bit about her. Thus, giving them too much open can affect their character that will eliminate the best quality from his personality.
However, despite the negative effect of freedom to make their own choices on their character, still they should not be prohibited to make decisions on every life matter. Too much restriction can make the child dependent on their parents for everything that can affect the child decision making ability that is crucial for getting successful in the future. Moreover, sometimes the children know better to decide on something than their parents and in that case refraining children can make the situation worse. For example, a friend of mine who knew in what major getting admission could be best for him but due to the convincing of parents he ended up getting admission in engineering which led to the destruction of his career. Therefore, spoon-feeding children and limiting their choices can negatively affect the decision-making skill and career.
In conclusion, there has been quite an arguments about how much liberty should be given to children making their own decisions about life matters. This essay discussed that why too much liberty can be harmful for their future prospects but why free will of making preferences to some extent is absolute necessary for the success and development of a child. In my opinion, in the early ages most of the children choices should be made by parents but once they get mature the decision making ability should be handed over to their children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2102.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 429.0 315.596192385 136% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89976689977 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56542665537 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.438228438228 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 645.3 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.9327904416 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.133333333 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274328227729 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12231786274 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801770641909 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197687273847 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0815155890924 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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