Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Different people around the world are facing a great challenge of tackling with bad situations. Some people opine that it is in our best interest to accept the worst situation, for example lack of money or undesirable job, while others argue that people should try to improve the situation. This essay will discuss that why it is necessary to improve the unpleasant situation instead of sitting idle.
On the one hand, some people encounters with challenges and they accept it to go on in life. They believe on the fate and thinks that nothing can be done to improve the situation due which they finally accepts what is going on in their lives. For instance, in US, 50% of the researches are abandoned in the middle after the occurrence of challenges in between. As a result, people accepts the worst and blame their fate for its occurrence.
On the other hand, people should spend lots of effort on improving the situation. There is a saying “If there is a will there is a way”, so if someone do commitment to tackle with the terrible situation then the doors will open for them. Nothing is impossible as long as the person has courage and commitment that can enforce the person to continue their efforts. For example, Robert Bruce, the king of Scotland was defeated several times by king of England but he didn’t lose hope and by trying again and again finally succeeded to take over his kingdom. Hence, with struggle, commitment and hope any situation can be improved.
In conclusion, in life, people can face different challenges but as long as the individual has the courage and commitment to fight, he/she can mitigate the unfortunate situation. In my opinion, despite the years of disappointments and struggle, one should not lose hope and continue their effort to improve the situation rather than doing nothing.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 203, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'accept'
Suggestion: accept
...ve the situation due which they finally accepts what is going on in their lives. For in...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 152, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...s a will there is a way”, so if someone do commitment to tackle with the terrible ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, hence, if, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87220447284 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60662936238 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523961661342 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0720955562 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.928571429 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207933245181 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712720418409 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591272638368 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13478475346 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762438443469 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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