Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you disagree or agree?
Nowadays there are many countries in the world, which leads to diversity in languages. Many people believe it would be a golden opportunity for them to cultivate their language skills supposed that they lived in a country using a second language whilst I completely agree with those who reckon it is disadvantageous in many aspects of life. This essay will analyze both views.
Turning to the agreed view. For those people who are at an early age, they can learn and apply new languages more effectively than other aged groups. This results in the ability that allows them to adapt quickly to the new society because they can either manage to accomplish a lot of tasks or communicate skillfully among their relationships. In addition, it is a perfect chance for them to explore various cultural identities in multicultural societies and enjoy life more. Hence, they are less unlikely to have mental or physical problems.
But the agreed opinions are outweighed by the opponents for many reasons. If the learners are in middle age or old age, they will probably struggle with acquiring new knowledge about the second languages. As a result, it reduces the efficiency in communicating, others especially bosses will get the misunderstanding for their poor performance. This can make them become fired and then even can be a bona fide heavy depression in many aspects if it keeps within long times. Namely, my close friend who lived abroad on his own for a years ago. When he first came to that country, he really got panic and completely shocked by the new culture and language. He had to cope with significant problems in reality. However, he then got back his confidence out of my advice and encouragement.
In summary, settling in a country that people have to speak a foreign language is both advantageous and detrimental in many ways. It is a big chance for the future of those who are able to use that language professionally, otherwise, it is a big challenge for weak language users.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 531, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a year' or simply 'years'?
Suggestion: a year; years
... friend who lived abroad on his own for a years ago. When he first came to that country...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, really, second, so, then, in addition, in summary, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88200589971 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86222655033 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581120943953 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8219339721 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9444444444 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120908722062 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0385203408114 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405509057058 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0812736928493 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289511621684 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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