Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Many people consider moving to a nation where they have to communicate in a different language from their mother tongue always brings many social and practical issues. I totally accord with such opinion. I believe that although it is challenging, the advantages of living in a foreign country and speaking a foreign language totally outweigh the drawbacks.
First of all, I concede that language barriers may provoke social troubles for people working and living abroad. If someone does not master the native language, he or she will be hampered from communicating with others and performing daily activities, such as buying groceries or taking instructions at work. Besides, language is a part of tradition and culture, not being able to speak the native language makes the immigrants feel hesitated and isolated from their surroundings and causes practical problems such as misunderstanding in doing bank transactions, missing the way to desired places, and etc.,. As a result, misunderstanding culture may lead to misleading behaviors and practical damage.
However, I strongly contend that most of those problems are not so thorny and can be overcome easily. While some people might claim that learning a new language is a time-consuming process, I would argue that the issue can be solved at its roots just by mastering the language, and immersing yourself in the environment of that language is considered the best way to learn that language. The most salient example of this is that students who study abroad can master the foreign language much faster than those who learn that language in their motherland. Consequently, the better their language skills they get, the fewer difficulties they have. Moreover, living in other nations also gives us opportunities to make new friends, learn about other countries' cultures or even find our own happiness.
To conclude, regarding the opinions which I listed, I totally believe that working and living abroad does not lead to serious issues as some people consider, it even brings more benefits than disadvantages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 599, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...ons, missing the way to desired places, and etc.,. As a result, misunderstanding culture...
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Line 3, column 607, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...sing the way to desired places, and etc.,. As a result, misunderstanding culture m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, first, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, while, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29696969697 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90590734895 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578787878788 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.0575682871 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.461538462 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3846153846 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230405524014 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766142904044 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464378132948 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129410026009 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056604834937 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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